Thanks for this wonderful site, which is very useful for beginning learners.

May I suggest what one native speaker confirmed as a couple useful corrections: 

我再摘朵花， translated here as "I’ll also pick some flowers to give her."

1. In spoken Chinese, the number 1 very often gets omitted, so that the measure word/classifier does not have the number which frequently precedes it. Here, it is one flower being picked; if it were some flowers, it would probably be "摘些花"
2. 再 implies that the action is being repeated, whereas translating it as "also" suggests that flowers are being picked for the first time. So a better way to translates this would be "I will pick another flower to give her